Starting early

I wasn't going to do a formal critique, but x-crossroad asked me to after the note I left <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)"/>

So, as I said in my short little doodle, I would have tried to get at a different angle, so that we could see more of this darling elephant's face. This of course, might have been impossible due to the i'm sure large enclosure he was in! My other thought was to zoom in just a bit if you wanted to include his whole body- cutting away some of the not needed 'negative' space around him. I also might have as an addition having zoomed in, done a second picture of his face and trunk, the wood and part of his front legs (perhaps half way between his right foot and right knee?).

Either way, this elephant is adorable! Great job at capturing him learning something new!